Thursday, September 15, 2005


Two poems: Aditi Raj Vyas, Final year IT
LOVE NOTE
When i go sad, when i feel blue.
when i need someone, to pamper me through,
i just close my eyes and an angle ambles through my dreams,
with his blowzy face and two twinkling eyes,
his blushing look and a sweet smile,
he holds my hand and pats my back,
his open arms and my head in his lap,
his gentle touch, just invigorates me through,
then begins my world with new open avenue,
Now today I confess and to be very true,
Who else he could be,
none other than 'u',
So it's quite natural..........
that i can't help fallin' in love with U.
THE ORPHAN
I am sitting with a crowd of people all around.
Yet i am alone, i hear no sound,
I hear no sound,but i hear cries,
Piercing ny heart,releasing those sights.
A gust of wind has blown me away,
strong emotions have made me sway,
Kicking the dust,I walk down the lane,
something hurts my heart, a stabbing pain,
I want to cry but i have no tears,
clutching me with old fingers, unknown fears,
So clearly, I remember when I close my eyes,
The accident, the blood, the painful cries.
The hospital, those moments, the funeral.
oh! why do I remember them so well.
My eyes fly open with a start,
I realize that i strayed apart,
Apart from my parents and the life i led,
i stand on the road, unblinking , staring ahead.
And I remember what people have said,
"I am nothing because my parents are dead".

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Aditi,
Both of your poems are very good and express your inner feelings.... but ORPHAN touches the soul. Really it is a nice poem. It reflects how much sensitive you are. Congs!

just A reader

Anonymous said...

hi adi,
i liked ur first 1 and i can very wel understand ur situation. u look very despirate 4 some1 but i guess u dont hav 1.......
catch with u later.>>>>!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Hi aditi
ur 2nd poem has touched my soul but ur 1st one has encouraged me to do something for people like u.

See ya Later

Anonymous said...

Aditi ...I want to sleep with u

Anonymous said...

Aditi ...I want to sleep with u